Open Poetry #33 |
Swelter |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Neon flashes outside a window starving for a fresh coat of yet another drab color as the shrill sound of a policeman’s whistle breaks the monotonous bark of a neighbor’s dog, suffering from a dry water bowl and a leash too short to reach the faucet’s drip. Beneath the window, a young couple, conjoined at the hips by love, stealing a moment of a torrid kiss, awaiting the dark of an alley on a moonless night. The thermostat set to freezing as a 1986 window air conditioner struggles against an afternoon’s swelter, blowing air that cools only the droplets of sweat from a furrowed brow. The chill of a bottled beer rolling across the forehead, the only consolation to an otherwise typical day as cloudless skies shelter only the moon from view and keep lovers in wait... wanting to turn up the heat...even more. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Love your descriptions, Barry! Very very visual. Much enjoyed. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what imagery! a great write! |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
very much enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Barry, this was awesome, I was right there, errrr, I mean, kinda standing in the background, you know, like watching a movie, this sir, is a Kodak moment...lovely imagry and thoughts. Keep them flowing. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now...you're emulating Dave Smith. Which is fine by me...my book is dog-earred... so, do it again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I really got in to this steamy reading experience! Were you perhaps reliving some memories of your own?!? Linda |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You capture the ordinary and make it extraordinary. Much enjoyed. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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