Open Poetry #33 |
What I Seek |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
What I Seek I cross my I and dot my T And brew my brew of mystery Drink it in a nighttime brood It is my let to down my food Meat and potatoes are a boor That is the food of evermore What I seek is quite unique It is the mist in all mystiques It comes to me the edge of dark Where silence is the light of spark And nothingness the rank of file That goes beyond the seeing wile I go this path no matter what It is the crossing of the dot Elimination of a phase Changing in its endless ways I dot the T and cross the I To find the hole and needles eye |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gooood mooooorning, Mr. I ! ~ er, I mean, Mr. T. ! It is so refreshing to read a man who dots his "I"s and crosses his "T"s! ~ Especially in a world that seems to have forgotten how to do either! I suppose that makes you the "IT" Man! EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya Sy, Top of the morning to ya Well sir, I believe your already there, if not very very close. Your smile wears words well, with anticipation for all prosperity those little signficant inner ones Smiles and hugs, great poem... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I dot the T and cross the I ~*~ Now why is it, I can't get away with that? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I try to remember...honest I do! Loved this morning's read Sy. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"What I seek is quite unique It is the mist in all mystiques" your I's and T's look fine to me in the mist and the tique. I like them all. Sincerely, Reg |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You do it all just right~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You make me giggle, Seymour! That's the crossed "i" and you make me think -- that's the dotted "t"! A good afternoon to you, sir! .....jo |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I enjoyed this. I like the flow and how it slipped off my tongue like silk sheets would a freshly shaven leg. Love, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Meat and potatoes are a boor That is the food of evermore What I seek is quite unique It is the mist in all mystiques It comes to me the edge of dark Where silence is the light of spark And nothingness the rank of file That goes beyond the seeing wile I go this path no matter what It is the crossing of the dot Elimination of a phase Changing in its endless ways ==================================== Sy-babers youre the coolest of the cool... ya turn rhymes into poetic golden rules. *ww* |
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