Open Poetry #33 |
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Blue Moon's Phrase Phase - a duet from Lady Ollyne and Lady in White |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Blue Moon's Phrase Phase Long since the moon hast come and gone Memories have embraced shadows of recall Swallowing them in dark night skies As phasing hast become me. Ah, but this month, ah, this, Dwells twice memories, so blue of moon That shades my shadows, and my bliss This phasing that 'twould be me. And therein lies the brightness, blued An addiction that my heart doest follow Delighting in softness of memories, Of he, the one who joins to bridge desires. For heart’s desires, they know me well, Binding mind to feet, in step of time, Guiding fate, which paves my path For twice!Desires shall moon this month. Sailing the skies, bending to breeze, to think ~ A Lady in love, sprawling words for all to see, Unexpected, this light to find behind those clouds That blues the moon twice for she. And in my heart, this she is me, My heart beats twice in time to rhyme Of ocean’s roar, or streams that seem To glisten wildly on this night’s shore. ~*~ So, time shall freeze the moments when A prism of blue will kiss the night, and Blending, We, with our thoughts of He, Memories, of Lady Ollyne, and Lady in White. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"So, time shall freeze the moments when A prism of blue will kiss the night, and Blending, We, with our thoughts of He, Memories, of Lady Ollyne, and Lady in White." Brava!! Brava!! What a beautiful treat! Two of Passions most talented Ladies.. blending their voices in tribute to the blue moon of July. Excellent write..well done ..hugs to you both! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my my my...what a lovely lovely two step this is... wonderful lacing of words and imagey ladies. love--a--leeeeeeee ![]() I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tis' a beautiful blending it is! Brava ladies! hugs, Chris ![]() |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Hand in hand they stroll the paths of heaven's unseen treasures, Amid the grandeur of the skies, ensconced in welkin pleasures, They hap' upon a blue of moon, and savor of its glow, Then send a wee bit back to earth, to we mortals here below. A pleasure to experience the gift of your penning fair ladies. Thank you for letting us partake of your poetic offering. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh so lovely you both are...thank you for this treat! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is so much to love about this, but these lines are striking and so very beautiful. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dwells twice memories, so blue of moon That shades my shadows, and my bliss This phasing that 'twould be me. And therein lies the brightness, blued An addiction that my heart doest follow Delighting in softness of memories, Of he, the one who joins to bridge desires. For heart’s desires, they know me well, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tonight's the night and it couldn't be lovelier than this, truly. Absolutely stunning poetry you two. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Stunningly lovely! We've a clear day here in Houston, hope to see it tonight. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyM~ & MadameK~ This is just a beautiful blend of gorgeous phrases so artistically phased~ Much admiration~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
lovely write from you two ![]() ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ladies, you are beautifully moon-tuned! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
You do the moon justise If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Penned exceptionally well by two of Passion's finest ladies.... Well done to you both on this moneth of two blues in the clear night skies. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I hope this isn't a once in a "blue moon" joining of talents. More..please. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very nice ladys, softly smiling here. very nice indeed.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well I guess I have to give thanks to a special Lady for sharing her thoughts ![]() M |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Thank you for keeping me straight, kind Lady. Methinks the heat hast gone to this one's head ![]() And I thank all of those Knights and Ladies who have taken the time to share our words~~ Ollyne |
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