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Susan
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0 posted 2004-07-06 09:30 PM



Slowly,

   Oh so slowly,

       I slip . . .

             Sliding . . .

I reach--

    Grip--

       Pull--

     Breathe . . .

Slowly,

     Oh so slowly,

I slip . . .
  
              Sliding . . .

I reach--

     Grip--

Pull--

             Breathe . . .

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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Magnus
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1 posted 2004-07-06 09:39 PM


And the Lumberjack said as the tree fell...
"TIMBER!!!!!"

OK,  I smiled....now what?

Seriously....seems as though the struggle
is endless....not sure,  you could help
me out on this one just a tidbit or two.
Old minds sometimes don't think quite as
well as younger ones....

OK,  now I have it.....sanity....duhhhhhh....

Susan
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2 posted 2004-07-06 09:52 PM


Ah Barry, glad you caught it.  Just playing here.  But sometimes one can feel as if their sanity is slipping, no?

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus
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3 posted 2004-07-06 10:07 PM


No arguments from me on that observation.

Glad I caught it too...otherwise I was
feeling a little dense...

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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4 posted 2004-07-06 11:00 PM


Well Susan I slipped down that slide some time ago.

EagleScorpion
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5 posted 2004-07-06 11:03 PM


tee hee hee
Susan
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6 posted 2004-07-06 11:11 PM


Thanks for sharing my fun,

Mr. AlleyCat, you've posted my portrait, how sweet -- .  Hey, maybe we're long lost twins separated at birth! (tee hee)

Ah, EagleScorpion, a very intimidating name, thanks for the laughter, made me smile.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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