Soul, Can't be breathing - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #33

Soul, Can't be breathing

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2004-07-07 04:29 AM

Soul, Are you breathing?
Yet still your sleeping
Soul, Are you breathing?
No, Can’t be waking.

Tear a hole through my insides
Come and listen to me
Take this chance in life
Come find what you
Were not meant to see
So, Come and listen to me.

Waking up, Bound to find
The truth you didn’t know lied
These memories you’ll play
That you can’t seem to fight
Go with the pain all shall fade.

Let the living die, Death will survive
Come listen to me, Listen to me!
Come on breath my soul
Do the gods not see it all?
You’re not sleeping anymore
You’re waking breathing
Time to settle the score.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2004-07-07 04:49 AM

I always enjoy your work!

Nicely done!

~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2004-07-07 04:51 AM

enjoyed this , thankx for sharing

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.