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Zing - Baby!
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Zing - Baby! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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your touch is as the burn of the sun leaving lingering trails fire hot nuclear fusion in action nuclei meeting reacting ions and electrons zapping Zing - Baby Ignite My World. s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
WooHoo!! Now that’s what I’m talkin’ about! Great write. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank JL -- funny how it's termed "cold fusion" when it comes across so hot! Ah, but then it is the interaction that creates the heat  Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH YES!!!! Good one! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Very good use of imagery!!!! Contabo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Nancy lee and Contabo. Can you believe once upon a time I wanted to be a nuclear physicist? Kid you not. My cousin works now in Los Alamos labs on fusion reaction. But I'll settle for the Zing any day Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...consider yourself zinged...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ A WOWSER to ignite the night~ You glow~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this sizzles, the first two stanzas are excellent! enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, thank you James, Marge and Serenity -- I had fun with this one, I'm gald you enjoyed it. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Electric electricity.....or is that chemistry?! Anyway, WOW! ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very hot! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
 it's physics -- yep, fun stuff.Thanks for your replies. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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