Open Poetry #33 |
Cornucopia |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Cornucopia That clinging word in your voice, you wish I could have been him… You are too elegant, too infamous for the likes of my whim… He couldn’t be found at the shore. Nor was he the one, knocking at your door… Yet your eyes chase the wind, hoping to find him… Are you not aware that you are free? Building castles is not in my repertoire… My love and life is within me It is the warm white sands and the crystal blue sea… |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"My love and life is within me It is the warm white sands and the crystal blue sea…" ~ Then you, yourself, are a veritable horn of plenty! Love & Light, EA |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I simply pause in awe. The content, the manner, the apparent calmness in which this was created... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
My love and life is within me It is the warm white sands and the crystal blue sea… and as it should be....sounds of reality written sailing across the emense azure bluebird of a crystal blue sea and those last 3 lines describe me as well Thank you always for your food of plenty smiles and hugs |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That clinging word in your voice, ... from that line you had me. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
JL~ This was short but powerful. I enjoyed very much. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
very well written piece, powerful and full of emotion enjoyed "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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