»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #33
»
I AM WALKING
| Open Poetry #33 |
|
I AM WALKING |
|
|
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
I AM WALKING On the edge of time Amongst the terror of day I am walking to find who I am Searching for the light! For Life. Past the trenches of broken dreams Amidst the deep rivers of my tears I am walking to find who we are Trying to uncover the mist! For truth. Along memories of childhood games Through the forest of solitude I am walking to find who they are Canvassing to unearth the tremor! For reality. Deep into the gorges of unfound gardens Between the ages of my being I am walking to stop where I venture Resting only when I find the end! For mercy. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and a long journey it will be |
||
|
~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
Very cool.  |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
J D, welcome to the march....no, really, I enjoyed your layout and the depth of your thinking....great write. ......jo |
||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome back, friend. It's been too long since you marched onto these blue pages. Hoping all is well for you.  |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Past the trenches of broken dreams Amidst the deep rivers of my tears I am walking to find who we are Trying to uncover the mist! For truth." DJD~It's always great to read you....I liked this part best. |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
DJD it is so good to read you again, I loved this. |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce writing...James |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
