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Open Poetry #33

Ebony Utopia...

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2004-07-29 04:17 PM

Let me hold the essence of the night,
In hand,
In song,
With melodies of lucid moonlight,
Harmonizing with the rhythmn of the stars,
Faint heavenly hymns,
Dancing amidst symphonious breezes,
Atop the silent wishes of children's bedtime prayers,
Let me gather the moon's neon rays,
Drape myself in their luminous beams,
Become entraced by this ebony utopia,
With its pungent scents of sweet nothings,
Drink it in,
Emerse into this mural of fire and ice,
A palette of dulcet delight,
Farewell the shades of crimson and gold,
Welcome the music of dreams still untold.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

1 posted 2004-07-29 08:14 PM

Such a soothing piece. I enjoyed this very much. I look forward to reading more from you.

Marti

Look deep, deep into nature,
and then you will understand
everything better.
Albert Einstein

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-08-01 09:46 PM

poetry in motion

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-08-01 10:14 PM

Very well written,  and I knew that your
pen name had a meaning,  just wasn't sure
what it was....Now I know...and perhaps it
is very appropriate for you to wear.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-08-02 04:02 AM

A perfect poem for me to end my night here on PIP. Absolutely what the title promises!

....jo

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