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In the Mist
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In the Mist |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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The mist of past caught my glance and held it there a spell like a magician would suspend a lady in the air. The power of my mind like a feather flies in wind freely floats down memory lane till unstable is the platform of my time concept. But meticulous and thorough and in depth recollections steal and kill the spark from the flame of life today and leave no embers glowing to highlight happiness. And yet the spell of growth immeasurable in merit and the knowledge gained of love inestimable in worth should be a stepping stone and not untimely mist rising from the ground. The mist is there, it’s here today, and the blind lead the blind like a mind leads the heart through flames of deep recall to the spark of present times. The spark of present times will one day be a flame when balanced on the platform of my time concept each day, week, month, and year, becomes as one moment. A lifetime to one moment and our moments are all there somewhere deep inside the abiding and ever rising eternal mist of time! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen "And yet the spell of growth immeasurable in merit and the knowledge gained of love inestimable in worth should be a stepping stone and not untimely mist rising from the ground." and I believe in it's own time, it will be just that! I've missed you!  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A lifetime to one moment and our moments are all there Yes indeed they are. For perhaps we are only here just one moment in time. Excellent! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi, Martie - I'm still around but am perhaps coming out of the writing spell. They say there's a season for all things - it's been a long season for me. Thank you, Chris, for the read and for so kindly commenting. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love it all, and all the more! Oh Helen, this got to me good!! What a beautiful, beautiful mind you have. Thank you for bringing out the beauty that lives within the human spirit. So many warm hugs to you~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi, Bluesy! How nice to see you here. Yes, indeed, there is beauty but perhaps spirit is spirit and human is human and another million years or so will see the two totally combined in all and everyone. |
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