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Contemplating Walls
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Contemplating Walls |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
As if alone... We wish for distant hands. Yet even walls are embraced by the space they seek to part. We stand as walls before the night... Caressed on every side. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Simply beautiful and the imagery is astounding. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Bravo, bravo. Even walls are embraced, yes indeedy bob, you the man!  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"We stand as walls before the night... Caressed on every side." Yes, I do believe you're totally right! Well said! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eric everything you write is so profound...so perfect! This, I so very much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What pure vision! This is amazing Eric. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't know how you do it say so much with so few words |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is beautiful. It was good to read you again. Hugs, Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
peacefully soothing...embracing read |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Caressed on every side" That is a nice feeling. enjoyed!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
what an upbeat turn of thinking about proverbial wall! Enjoyed the creativity in this! miscellanea misc'e |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
You did a wonderful job with your choice of words. Contabo |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Simply, beautiful... ~tier |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Eric, you have a rare cosmic perception of what it means to be ONE with All there is. Stunningly beautiful and as comforting as a warm embrace. Loving you, Margherita  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"We stand as walls before the night... Caressed on every side." Lovely, romantic......wow.  ....jo |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I love your form and vision. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ericc, you never disappoint the reader. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Can't let this one go without replying. amazing poem - I love this thought! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric ~ The world of love is an ethereal and dreamy place when seen through your eyes ~ and heart...  Linda |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~i'm pleased to be reading here and enjoyed coming across these thoughts of yours. i did. (and my replies are completely out of shape at this point so i apologize for that) |
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