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decomposing Freud
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decomposing Freud |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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quickened life within the shell fire in the hole as wept in fables and mythologies consistant themes of Hell are screened beneath the lids of eyes asleep A Dream no (too much certainty) A Dream, he nods. I dream? (You dream...) "Wake me when it's over then--" NO. I'm screaming as he nods "Don't wait--just wake me now." I sobbed. "I sleep" as he began to rot. Right before my very eyes a decomposing Sigmund Freud, "Take a left at Jung." He died. I woke? "you dream..." He laughed at me (I missed a bus on 2nd st...) I woke and wrote this poem. (I hope.) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Take two Seconal's and call me in the morning....a few days from now.  Just kidding my dear Serene one. All I can say is WOW. This one is gonna keep me awake now. Hugs! Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW is right, take a right turn at Jung......loved that line.....great weird wonderful write and a keeper.  .....jo (been having some pretty weird ones myself these days (dreams, that is)....lol)[This message has been edited by iliana (07-12-2004 12:03 PM).] |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
Amazing. In my eyes, I'm not lazy. In your eyes, I'm not worth it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kewl! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Every time you take that bus... you surpass yourself. Brava! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I was truly a poet...I'd of written that lullaby by now...........   I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Do I dream I am a butterfly or am I a butterfly? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like this, I like this very much. Made me smile.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, oh, the images I got from this one... of a decomposing Freud, and making a Jungian left turn.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Ser!! Each post surpasses the previous! Love ya lady~ |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Wonderful...left me wanting more! Kelly You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Jeez! and I thought only Beethoven decomposed!  I'll bet you look great in a Freudian slip |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity Maybe I travel in the wrong vehicle? Pretty amazing, this poem, and you! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*chuckles to Balladeer* And thanks to all for reading my weirdness, and no, this one isn't another true serenity story--I was simply doing an exercize trying to capture the essence of one of those bizarre dreams, and I attempted to layer in interpretation and the infamous conflict of Freud and Jung. Weirdo me. Thanks again with my love to all!  |
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