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lgina
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0 posted 2004-07-28 12:29 PM



One little person so new and alone.

Not knowing anyone except me.

Bright eyes, tender touches and needs for so much more.

Can I be the one who fills those nees?

Do I even know my own .

Why is he mine?

Do I deserve such a gift?

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-07-28 04:21 AM


we all deserve life

you will both do fine

Martie
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2 posted 2004-07-28 05:14 PM


lgina

When I had my first child I felt like this.  

Krawdad
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3 posted 2004-07-28 06:03 PM


Not an uncommon start.
Embrace the challenge.

dgvarner
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4 posted 2004-10-09 05:00 PM


Yes, Its the way most of us start off with a very new little bundle of responsibility...   You're not alone...!

nice write ..
hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

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ctowen
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6 posted 2004-10-10 09:15 AM


What I really found interesting to your write
   is the view of which one could be talking
   about finding themself ....

          A lifetime of hope
          is a lifetime of growing
          each day at a time.


     Wishing you and Owen the best of these days.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2004-10-10 10:03 AM


Igina~
What a beautiful blessing of discovery ... for you BOTH~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Margherita
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8 posted 2004-10-10 10:09 AM



You feel this tender communication and as it is new, you wonder ...
You are a precious gift to each other.
My best wishes!
Speak to him giving voice to your heart. He will understand even if he can't speak yet.
That's a wonderful opportunity to know each other.
Love, Margherita

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