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Open Poetry #33

Birthright

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-27 04:52 PM

Birthright

you took so much
and wanted more
slipping bone from muscle
leaving me so lacking
without a leg to stand on
but watch there is
a glimmer in the corner
of your eye too fast
for you to catch and it
is this woman in bounce
fluttering again from a fall

for love is my birthright
and I will not be denied

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-07-27 06:03 PM

1slick_lady
So what's a Meta for. Enjoyed

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-07-27 08:37 PM

Yes, it is!

.....jo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-07-27 09:56 PM

And you shouldn't be denied!
Good write Helen.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2004-07-27 10:41 PM

"a glimmer in the corner
of your eye too fast
for you to catch and it
is this woman in bounce
fluttering again from a fall

for love is my birthright
and I will not be denied"

What force could possibly stand in your way? There is power in positivity. (Is that a word???)
Enjoyed the read Helen.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-07-28 04:24 AM

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