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"All In" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Beneath the gold a tomb cajoles simple magick--act of craft press the forehead to the tome begging eye to hear the past typing stories hypnotize punctuated with a tip of my tongue in slight - my "tell"-- a lick of cornered lips a tip-- glancing with a sideways pass just before I grind the bones tracing death in glimpse of fact here I leave you with a kiss and promise that I will laugh last. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I leave you with a kiss and promise that I will laugh last." Not a doubt in my mind...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile--hey Dunc, just me flipping the finger at death again. Sometimes I just feel like going "all in". nod. you know. hugs puppy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I leave you with a kiss and promise that I will laugh last." Dang your good Ser! Love the title too... my grandmother used to have a saying.. when she was dog tard, 'I'm all in but my shoelaces' Thanks for the memory trigger. This is....so you! Love ya lady...and your new pic! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem Ser!!!!! I like the ending lines. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
punctuated with a tip of my tongue in slight - my "tell"-- a lick of cornered lips Oh yes.  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh yes... this is so you. I love it when you show me. love ya gorgeous and the pic  Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. ~Stevie Nicks~ |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Loved it thank you darlin |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ser. mysterious write....your title inspired me to write a poem about poker, being "all in"..... not exactly in sync, so to speak. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen Touching screen here...because I care, and I can.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
hmmm...hell hath no fury...dee da dee da dee da... Hey? I like your new picture. I think I've seen it in a dream. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
glancing with a sideways pass just before I grind the bones tracing death in glimpse of fact here I leave you with a kiss and promise that I will laugh last. =============================== I do so love when you candle dance.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Me thinks Mrs. Decorating Challenge needs a siesta Is that you? The many faces of Sen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
glancing with a sideways pass just before I grind the bones tracing death in glimpse of fact here I leave you with a kiss and promise that I will laugh last. tracing.... you know witch, that tracing with crushed bone gives substance to it all... you know the last laugh is learning to live well.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now this.... is libraried, for those long alone nights... and the pic? Priceless. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Ochie....poor man? We woman have certainly come a long way Very adament read...good write |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity...Enjoyed very much. You have such a style and way of twisting your words and our minds. Taste the smell of dirt as it covers face Down, down I go into the darkness of earth To live or die.... deal the cards of life the joker comes to claim it's prize. Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*hugging the monitor* thank you all |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
When comes the day of the sensative monitor? Yikes!  Was that a cackle I heard? e |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Grand! |
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