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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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spit balls were 60's paintballs with rubber band guns and beaver cheaters were socially required sometimes sometimes not on friday nights at the drive-in down by the a&w outta town was only a mile to the edge of the timber and the forest roads where fords got stuck or ran out of gas facing down hill were hotels by the hour or night depending on fistfight dads or understanding moms harley noise was a sin then good girls didn't look but their mom's did and said bad words later when they had bad dreams and wishes while washing dishes for some bernie smoking a pipe and reading the sports juke box at the timber inn still plays the old songs bar maid was a good girl then says I look like a picture her mom had in the bible but my hair was long and I had a beard and she has seen that tattoo of the angel thing before and did I know I had her eyes or that she had mine ________________ Dark |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I just love the flavor of this. And you know what I think about Harley's. Thank heavens good girls can like Harley's now  Great read first thing in the morning.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is simply awesome Dark. I was warned a very long time ago about motorcycles and the men who rode them. I am now married to one of those men & yes ... I love his Harley too!! Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
very cool ~K~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
parroting all the comments above, adding your writes are amazingly cleaver. Brilliant actually...you should do a book...or a journal put together like a book Very well done!!!! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This write has been on my mind all day, and now my perception has changed... It's the eyes, I finally see... ~K~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done sir.. as usual.. you write with a captivating way..and with a grit I enjoy |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
AHHHH take me back, take me back.....Wonderful writing that bring memories to those of us who are old enough.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
What a cocktail of sensations you write with m'friend. I love it. I've missed reading you. M The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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