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CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

0 posted 2004-07-25 07:24 PM

I glance up
from reading
to see her sitting
in the chair opposite me
in the aisle

she looks up quickly
and smiles
opens her book
i can see the cover

Bukowsi, sure
me too.

I go back to reading
hear a sound
like paper rustling

stockings rubbing together

I look up again
I can see up her skirt
far enough up
to hold my attention

she looks up again
and smiles

I put down my copy
and as I walk by her
I point to her book
and say

"Bring that with you"

as I drop my room key
into her lap.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2004-07-25 07:33 PM

bed time stories...nice

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-07-25 07:43 PM

ya know... i tried.. i wanted to say something profound.... LOL however.. all that comes to mind is...
naaaaaaaaaughty!!! ***smirk***

loving it.

snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-07-25 08:09 PM

I can just picture this scene -- have to go along with Snow! Much enjoyed -- you have a gift of passing on moving pictures, CM!

....jo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-07-25 09:00 PM

Oh this is a classic!
Love it!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

5 posted 2004-07-25 09:41 PM

I just love B&N...lol

thanks everyone

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2004-07-26 01:23 AM

barnes and noble?

for me it's borders :-)

unless i'm totally off on the b&n :-D

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

7 posted 2004-07-27 07:02 AM

Yes, it was barnes and noble i was refering too....but Borders works best for me as well...lol.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

8 posted 2006-01-16 02:42 PM

Damn!
Oops..*hand over my mouth* Just the first thing that came to my lips..

Great imagery..

hugs,g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-10-27 05:41 PM

good write

ARCTIC WIND

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