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Where once ... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Where once a flame now ash remains a symbol of the past burnt and dead laid to rest in grates of every heart. Where once the light now darkest night a symbol of daydreams annihilated by the power of nightmares. Where once was love now only doves a symbol of true flight unachieved, out of reach, by land bound human beings. “Where once” as memory excites internal energy and implants within a body the element of hope. Where once was hope; there’s always hope, on wave lengths of a brain flying high and higher into realms of fantasy. Where once was fantasy there’s only now reality a symbol of what once appeared before it disappeared. Where once was reality there’ll only be a “me” a symbol or a fantasy of past daydreams and love and hopefully a memory to excite your energy! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice ending I like the positive outlook |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful writing. Eric |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ It is always such a pleasure to read your poetic thoughts~ This is beautifully done~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you Dixie, Eric, and Marge. I do appreciate you taking the time to comment. |
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