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An Open Letter, [maybe, hanky alert?]
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An Open Letter, [maybe, hanky alert?] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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An Open Letter Dear Mom and Dad, It’s still raining…since Thursday, we’ve had oh, about three inches, plus a teardrop or two. But the rain is needed, ponds were so low, some were even dust, but this summer, the rains have come, tans are weak as the sun has been hiding, but no one is chanting, yet, rain, rain, go away. I was thinking of you today, was going to call, then got caught up in the fact that some lines are still down, but the letter has been long in coming, so I thought I would write. Three inches plus. Isn’t that something? In the last 48 hours, so much has changed, so much has stayed the same. I’m reminded that it seems to some, I don’t pay much attention to the outside world, but you see, I do… and I need to heal, somehow, so I find myself puttering. If I were to do some real housework, then the maid wouldn’t have anything for me to pay her for, her bank account would lean, though the house would probably be a bit better for it, although I wouldn’t have found time to write. I did do some laundry, since it won’t do itself, and I had to laugh when I read, “line dry”, because it’s raining, the shell would only stay wet, so I “in-dried”, and left the le behind. Did dishes, too, electronic devices come in so handy, because the dish didn’t run away with the spoon, though the cow may have hooked the moon, I haven’t seen it in a while… and my shadows are missing my soul. So many I know are coming to meet you… I wonder if you will know me through them, if they will tell you of how I am doing, even though I really know you already do. Brother and I, we’ve reconnected of late, sharing once again – but even more than before – no fights now, no having to move the coffee table that we might bang our heads, our fingers weaving along keyboards, quilling and quilting us again in all memories… his, mine, sharing what we knew, and what we knew only to us, of both of you. Even Sissie decided to reconnect, for we were all a bit lost for some while – I guess missing you was so great, that we could not hang ourselves out on the line… too wet, you know. It’s still raining. And I guess you’ll always find me thinking…just like you said, Mom… thinking of both of you, and how are your naked ladies, dad? I still have your amaryllis seeds… for they still hold all your promises. Ok. I hear you. Time for some rains to stop…time to complete the real promises. Thanks…again, for all the love you gave us. Unconditional love is, was, just like yours… Love, Sissie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Such a tender letter of love! Made me remember rainy days and my mom....and all the clothes that hung on every chair around the house and on a wooden gismo in front of the furnace.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A deeply touching letter, dear Karilea. Your gratitude for their unconditional love is so very beautifully displayed. Your thoughts wander and memories seem to reflect in the rain ... Love, Margherita  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it actually made me think of my kids....*sniffle* and thanks for the warning...  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
though the cow may have hooked the moon, I haven’t seen it in a while… and my shadows are missing my soul. For some reason, this is the part where I needed a hanky. A very sensitive write Karilea. Hugs, Chrislane Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Smiling at you for this ... so many thoughts from this come out...thanx for the share of a life, or two or three... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
So precious, Sunshine. Thank you! ~tier |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"and my shadows are missing my soul." I bow to you. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Even in the sadness, your wit stays alive! " I did do some laundry, since it won’t do itself, and I had to laugh when I read, “line dry”, because it’s raining, the shell would only stay wet, so I “in-dried”, and left the li behind. Did dishes, too, electronic devices come in so handy, because the dish didn’t run away with the spoon, though the cow may have hooked the moon, I haven’t seen it in a while…" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You're right a hankie alert needed. Well done. misc'e |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 dang...you got me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
im with dix you got me too |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Add me to the list. When I read this first, I couldn't even find the words to say.  ......jo |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wonderful write Karilea. Heartfelt. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
For some reason when I read this...this is what came to mind. As a kid it was my job to clean the lines. In the winter, outside I would go cleaning, cleaning and cleaning. Back and forth, back and forth. My hands would get so cold. I hated it. I hear people say..."I love hanging my clothes outside they smell wonderful." Me on the other hand think "NoWay." That's what my dryer is for with a sheet of fabric softener. Impressions that are made upon are mind as a child. Some pleasant, some not so pleasant. Gee! Listen to me ramble. Enjoyed the read. BonBon  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mom... HUGS |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
wow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A sensitive and intimate sharing of a daughter's enduring love for her parents. To Love & Life Eternal, Linda |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Tear alert for sure...Thank you for sharing your heart so beautifully with us....**hugs** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dear lady, thank you, for the reminder to appreciate my mother more whilst still here with us...I cannot tell you how at times she literally saved my life...and I owe her, so very much...not because I have to, but because I can and want to...love to hear her stories...see her smile...smell her close, and be there with her when life gets a little difficult for her, as she's loosing all her friends. Thank you from my heart, for the memory of blessings and greatitude. OK, now you've done it, off to fetch some kleenex. smiles and hugs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, you have a way of making moods with a melody did you say tan? (hehe) wonderful stuff ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I wasn't sure how this would be received; I am so pleased to have heard from several through private e-mails... that it's OK to bare one's heart. Thank you ALL for reading. Sun |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
by the way, did I mention how brightly the sun was shining today?  back to the top it goes |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Stunning! Eric |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You are amazing....... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I happened to read your comments for critiques just as I was starting to reply to this piece and in answer to those two posted questions: What pulled me in here? I know you don't disappoint and this piece is no exception to that What am I taking away? Perhaps reflections about todays world and what we do/don't do just to survive in it and thoughts of how we tend in a world of communication to lose touch with those who most matter. Truth be told, no one can take away anything from this piece, it's perfect just the way it is |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is just unbelievably fantastic! I've read and re-read it and each time more tears but some lines bring a smile. You are a magician with words. Hugs, Marti Look deep, deep into nature, |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Kari, As you know I don't always reply to everything I read here, but this is just so amazing I had to say thank you. I lost my mom last October and this made me remember some good times (they were far and few between). You DO have a way with words! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Oh wow. Beautiful message! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As I had reason to go through the archives tonight to find some gifts for some wonderful women, I found "this one" again...and I needed to come back, and thank you who came later, to share with me your thoughts. God bless you. God bless Ron, who gave us Passions in which to lend our thoughts, lest they be forgotten.  |
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