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When you hear the raindrop falling .............. bloooob !
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When you hear the raindrop falling .............. bloooob ! |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
When you see the rain that falls.. Or see the sun that shines.. The day is cut in lines. So thats were the angels calls. If you do not listen.. You will not hear.. It wont release the fear.. It will never be forgiven.. So stop up !!! And listen.......... bloooob Life is for mee to be ! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Big smiles and hugs...a good one One that I especially needed today Now how did you know...(Wink) Have a great day |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Jes...this is perfect! what a neat write! Thanks for sharing...I needed this today  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Good one. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes i think i hear better when i dont strain to listen, but i do understand what you are saying |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
My son always said when he was little that the rain sounded like bacon sizzling. Some night stand and listen to the rain and close our eyes. It does have that sound. Good One BonBon  |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
LeeJ Im glad you liked it and im glad you got a smile too. " Smile " passing shadows Well smile thanks Passing, and im glad you enjoyed it. " Smile " JL Good one. JL Thansk JL and how does she know i look cute in the dark hehe, just kidding. inkedgoddess Yes i know exactly what you mean there too, but good we soemtimes know how to stop up for abit, and live the life we have. Bonnie j As i read ya comment Bonnie i could hear that bacon sizzling there, and i even could smell it. I love when words does give a meaning like a imaginary picture a feeling, a smell, and even a touch. Smile to ya all. Sorry my old name in here but my explorer started me up on that but i have my own name again. See ya soon Smiles Jes / Dreamer |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Sorry i got a double click, and i cant delete it. |
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Angeltears New Member
since 2010-08-08
Posts 9 |
Hi Dad Nice one hugs Michelle |
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