Open Poetry #33 |
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You Tarzan, Me Jane |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA ![]() |
You, your love you're always vaunting. You, you always leave me wanting. You’re always gone but always haunting. I am hungry for your touch. You are the hunter, me the prey. But you keep me miles and miles away. And the cage that circles ‘round my heart Bars me from running very far. You Tarzan. Me Jane. I’m stuck in the jungle; you’re on a plane. [This message has been edited by iliana (07-24-2004 05:24 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
somehow...in the movies, there is always a convenient vine--smile? (NOW there's a title!) A convenient vine...depends upon the swing of thangs tho...yanno? (of course you do) love ya jo thump-thump-thump "me tarzan---you came?" ![]() (forgive me? it's late, or early, depending upon if you've slept) ![]() |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
OMG; ROTFWLl! I never sleep, are you kidding?! No, not quite true....but not much. Thanks for the grins, Sugar! Hope you're doin' well. luv ya, jo |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
LMAO!!!!!!!!! i tell myself... never read the comments that came before me... for exactly this reason.. i'm sitting here chuckling over a comment and totally forgot what i wanted to say to YOU! *rolls eyes* {{regaining composure}} you know.... this "And the cage that circles ‘round my heart Bars me from running very far" is a deep line ... offering me a place to ponder with my own thoughts... i like that. :-) ~S "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My Dearest Lily, your poetic and emotional valley runs very deep. This aches with lonliness ~ and frustration. There was a time, when I too, could have expressed similar sentiments ~ but trust me, they could not have been written as raw or as real as this. You truly are a poetess and one with a wealth of talent. ![]() Love ya, lily! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Just get the magic carpet out of the closet It's much faster than a plane. LOL |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Smiling at you, Jo. This hurts. But I ask you where is Cheetah? Cheetah was always my favorite, always hanging around, stirring up trouble! Take care, Jo. Cathy |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A hot night in the jungle, ALONE, is not much fun. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Like! This is creative and fun and yet smacks of emotion. It also made me chuckle. Hugs to you-- ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You witty, me smiling... ![]() |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Snow - How could you not help but laugh -- I've told her she needs to do stand up comedy for real....one witty gal, for sure. The poem is a deep one, but not to worry..... humor is the key to everything I think (wish I had a little more; my wit is pretty dry, really). Earth Angel - You are correct but it never lasts too long -- I am a moody gemini at times (still trying to integrate the twins, I think! lol). Thank you, Angel, for your very thoughtful post. You flatter me so.....love you, jo Seymour -- I will consider that purchase before long, I s'pect! LOL miscellanea - No, not meant to hurt. Past that. Cheetah, now there's an idea! luv, jo Midnitesun - Yes! You got it! Susan - I am really pleased you found the humor in it (beyond the loneliness) because that was the intent (along with the emotional outburst -- lol). Glad you chuckled...it was supposed to do that. *hugs* back, jo Passing Shadows - ![]() Sunshine - Me smiling.....you, witty! Thanks for stopping by. *hugs* |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have to make Serenity comment LAST.... I couldn't help but laugh at her reply. Like the poem....dang vines never were very dependable. Plane, huh? Sheesh... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Barry, thanks for your post. I've tried those vines; yes, dang vines; they keep breaking on me! lol If I can get cheetah to let me out of this cage..... .think I'll try Seymour's magic carpet! ![]() |
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