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Open Poetry #33

Make it Last

lgina
Member

since 2004-07-20

Posts 52

0 posted 2004-07-24 01:18 AM

Your love warms me like the rays of sun on a fresh spring day,

The looks are as intense as the flames of a fire out of control.

The understanding is as genuine as the first kiss.

The future is white like a new fallen snow, that eventually melts away.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-24 01:35 AM

Oh, if we could only makes those moments last -- nice thoughts penned here!

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

2 posted 2004-07-24 01:54 AM

LOving it.....keep it up

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-07-24 11:02 AM

lgina

It's not always easy to make it last...well expressed in this poem!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-07-24 11:44 AM

Very very nicely expressed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-07-24 02:32 PM

nice

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