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Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2004-07-23 11:08 PM

She found warmth
in another's world
   while
under sheets of ice
I slept
   unaware
how quickly seasons
change

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-23 11:13 PM

Topheth -- This was great! ......jo

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-07-23 11:13 PM

Excellent write. Very much enjoyed.
Good to read you again. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2004-07-24 07:33 PM

Isn't it amazing how things change when we sleep, sometimes for good sometimes for evil? And to go without sleeping, not to miss anything, is the path to madness. Good clear write.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2004-07-24 09:28 PM

Great write! Hoping the next few seasons will be warm and cozy...
misc'e

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-07-24 09:54 PM

This could relate to a coma...

or something as deeply concerning as inattention...

either way, short and to the point. Well done.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-07-24 10:19 PM

Sort of thinking along the same lines as
Sunshine, some things slip away from us
when we have not noticed they are there,
or were...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2004-07-25 12:13 PM

gosh this one goes right to the heart...very sad...very touching....
and so glad to read you again!

been a long time

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-07-25 01:23 AM

oh yes!
damn this is goooooood

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2004-07-25 09:26 AM

a sad wake-up call
an excellent write

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

10 posted 2004-07-25 09:31 AM

she's out cheating and he's home in bed alone?

hmm...or maybe thats just me....

good read

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-07-25 09:47 AM

You have a fine pen ~ that matches your fine face!

You may be extinct in her books, but that only frees you up to be loved by someone else who is more deserving of you!

Love & Light,
EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2004-07-25 12:29 PM

sad

but this too shall pass

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