Under our star, salmon red

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Open Poetry #33

Under our star, salmon red

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

0 posted 2004-07-22 01:22 PM

Washed mustard yellow fields
Paled by morning's mists
And our star, salmon red
Warms me, melts the dew off my car
As we hurtle in dawn's light
To the airport
To drop you off
As we live your dream

Heading home, I remember Grandma
Who let Grandpa go to live his
-I can do it too-
The mists are gone now
Canola is bright and smiling
As we all grow and flourish
Under earth's beautiful star

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-22 01:24 PM

Beautiful poem, Copperbell! Liked the imagery and your courage!

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

2 posted 2004-07-22 01:58 PM

Everyone needs a dream...
this has some very special layers
about it.

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

3 posted 2004-07-22 02:22 PM

Thank you Iliana, it was a beautiful morning - and I've had some good examples of people living dreams to learn from

Thank you Soleil Noir, I appreciate what you said

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-07-23 02:52 AM

colorfully beautiful

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