Open Poetry #33 |
I Feel Temptation Wandering In The Wind |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I have slipped through the ages laced in the beams of the silver moon rising, and beveled reality's edges of time; I've hunted the paths of the golden moon's yearning, for lovers and loose bits of rhyme; I've scavenged the trails of new moons in waning for vantage points offering gain, but the blue moon that's coming offers a door chosen by no man who's sane; it belongs to Diana the Huntress of yore, and her dark Northern sister Morgaine; last time in haste I raced to escape the grasp of the goddess of mortal man's pain; by the great oath I swore I managed to gain both freedom and scars, but with the two of them knowing I've trespassed before. ©2004 by icebox |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
sigh....I'm not sure what to say to describe the thoughts conjured on this piece but I loved it! ~Live and Laugh~ The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It must be nice to have things so well defined.....nice in some ways, hell in others. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"and beveled reality's edges of time" What a cool line. Beveled edges just offer more space to slip over the edge. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I've hunted the paths of the golden moon's yearning, for lovers and loose bits of rhyme; I've scavenged the trails of new moons in waning for vantage points offering gain, but the blue moon that's coming offers a door ~*~ many a door seeking hearts in long... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"freedom and scars" so if you were to follow that temptation again would you be so lucky the second time?? Icy, you make me think to much. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Forboding but grand reading, Icebox. Thanks for the reminder about the Blue Moon. Think I'll do a little research..... ....jo |
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