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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-07-21 08:25 PM

slowly, slowly this wheel turns,
bound to a slower wheel
bound to a slower
to a slower
a slower
slower
and
I
will
wait
for you
until then
when all the
wheels of time
have aligned for us
and we will be together
unbound and lovers once again

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2004-07-21 08:36 PM

cool!!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-07-21 08:37 PM

Jamie

Time is like that, it seems...rolling with or against. Wonderful form to this and such poignant thoughts.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2004-07-21 09:14 PM

"I
will
wait
for you
until then
when all the
wheels of time
have aligned for us
and we will be together
unbound and lovers once again"

I loved this

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

4 posted 2004-07-21 09:15 PM

what a cool and creative piece, simply awsome!

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

5 posted 2004-07-21 09:23 PM

Forget about the ingenious way in which you made it possible for your poem to make sense and your formation to be beautiful; the words were gorgeous. Simple. Short. Meaningful. I loved it.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2004-07-21 09:32 PM

The wheels turn...
the clock ticks,
the sand streams...

Excellent

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2004-07-21 09:35 PM

Creative, thoughtful, and beautiful...
this is one that will stick in the mind long after reading.
Love it

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2004-07-29 02:40 PM

What a creative presentation... how tender and beautiful this anticipation of reunion. *S* A love so cherished and yearned for is to be envied. *S*

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