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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-07-21 03:09 AM


Every Word of Love (Even wishes come true)


My eyes open wide to see her.
My lips yearn to kiss her succulent lips.
I love to smell the sweet fragrance that is her.
The little turn of her nose, her glamorous pose,
her butterfly ears, the grace of her years.

Oh God I get so lonely sometimes.
I wish she would be my special angel
until the end of time, the one that more
than anyone in this world wants to be mine.

I wish she loved me sincerely, yes I sincerely do.
I wish that every word of love that comes out of
her mouth would be nothing but true.

And God for this I appeal to you, for I know
that sometimes even wishes come true.


JamesLee
July19
2004

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1 posted 2004-07-21 03:55 AM


how you grow each day in your writing! well done!
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2 posted 2004-07-21 10:22 AM


JamesMichael~
Such a sincere prayer-wish~
Beautifully penned~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-07-21 10:28 AM


james, I'm astounded by your sincerity...ask her...ask her?  

God bless your prayers

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-07-21 11:54 AM


True love.  Great poem.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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