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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-07-20 07:44 PM

Four Days Of...

I walked the shoreline, remembering those friends
that hold me up, missing still others
that have passed their time
and feel the gentle breezes flowing,
my hair in wisps and my manner child-like.

I walked my lifeline, seeing what was,
and in the distant mist looking for you.
Wondering if we would ever meet this way,
my fantasy in real, the ocean waves licking at our feet
and a warm hand in mine.

I need no pictures to remind me,
for one touch holds a lifetime,
much more than words, the passion in my heart
and all that has happened in my yesterdays
has added a depth to my world
where it counts.

So I breathe deeply and reflect knowing
you are there, here in my always,
each and every one of you...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-07-20 07:48 PM

Maureen, this is by far one of your best
writes. It has so much depth, feelings
and emotions wrapped within it...a poem
that one does not easily forget...for it
carries within it that which many of us
have experienced as well.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-07-20 07:50 PM

M, May I echo what Barry just said...?
Your best by far!
Heart Hugs dear lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-07-21 01:41 PM

Just too beautiful for words.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-07-21 02:23 PM

M,

This was so beautiful..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-07-21 02:39 PM

Agree, agree, agree.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-21 02:55 PM

I'll always have a warm hand, heart, and shoulder for you

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-07-21 03:02 PM

some things just are meant to stay with us

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-07-21 03:09 PM

I need no pictures to remind me,
for one touch holds a lifetime,
much more than words, the passion in my heart
and all that has happened in my yesterdays
has added a depth to my world
where it counts.

Your heart beats with understanding and a home of passion for life...tremendous read

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2004-07-21 03:28 PM

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