Open Poetry #33 |
Thief of Happenstance....reposted for Sunshine |
Martie
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Thief of Happenstance So swift the movement of grace in dance of air is caught within the gentle hold of web laced to the corner of the house It called me from a quick glance that stopped half way to the mailbox delighted a drift to rescue a thief of happenstance Frangible ovule of flight to drift on current I blew a breeze not reckoned more than breath with lips to kiss the flight of fairy across the lawn away ------- Because of........ /pip/Forum90/HTML/000507.html |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This IS Ron's home...isn't it? Replete with Kleenex, or other worthy tissues, or perhaps his own mother's hankies... I wasn't expecting this, at all... but I thank you, even more, for the unexpected. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSister~ You are graceful ink~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful dear Martie. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You do find poetry in the smallest and finest parts of the world. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Frangible ovule of flight to drift on current I blew a breeze not reckoned more than breath with lips to kiss the flight of fairy across the lawn away ...and by creating that "breath poem" to touch it just then, you changed the course of its life. All it became -- where it came to rest and how it grew -- became yours, and you became part of it. Poets are like that....some very much like that. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Frangible ovule of flight to drift on current I blew a breeze not reckoned more than breath with lips to kiss the flight of fairy across the lawn away we so touch the lives of others...so very profounding, without even relizing...and you dear poetess, have touched so many with your wise words and compassionate heart. Thank you for writing and sharing simply beautiful |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very very nice Martie --- but then it is logical that nice poetry comes from a very very nice person - Paul |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So swift the movement of grace in dance of air is caught Your words describe your work better than I ever could. *S* Excellent write!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Martie, this is so good. You and Sunshine should team up on one soon. .....jo |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jo...we do...and have done so several times in the past. Martie? When you're game, let me know... |
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