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Morrow's Skies
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Morrow's Skies |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Fear not this soul, nor flesh, nor blood that waits beyond the cold stone wall. Fear not thy dreams of wanderlust for I dear heart, await thy call. I stand in cloak of misted morn upon the meadow soft and green I wait to hear a melody of sweet desire, of flaxen sheen. My heart rests not within a chest where butterflies do flit and rise For from my soul, a love does course and soars the star filled moonlit skies. If but a hewn rope might fall before my feet beneath thy window's sill. I’ll climb my love, to touch thy hand and taste thy wine blushed lips, I will. And whence the dawn does cast upon thy eyes once closed in dream swept sleep I’ll bid thee well my love, I will and pray the morrow’s skies don’t weep. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"If but a hewn rope might fall before my feet beneath thy window's sill. I’ll climb my love, to touch thy hand and taste thy wine blushed lips, I will. And whence the dawn does cast upon thy eyes once closed in dream swept sleep I’ll bid thee well my love, I will and pray the morrow’s skies don’t weep." Such a beautiful sigh this is Barry... Very much enjoyed the read this afternooon. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautifully penned! thank you for the journey. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done sir.. well done indeed.. smooth rhyme and meter..along with just being overall nicely done |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sigh . . . words fail me, sigh again.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You are an incurable romantic and it makes for wonderful, uplifting poetry, the kind sighs are made of. Corinne |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ooooooooh, Barry....a perfect poem in every way. Much enjoyed! ........jo |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling man, this is so utterly perfect, the way it wraps around my soul is simply divine, I can’t tell you how magical your writing is. Just know this that when I slip in to PiP’s I always seek out your writing, and I never fail to feel the magic you manage to conjure within my mind every single time. Truly excellent writing, you are one amazing poet and I love your ability to write real romance. as always Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Such an old fashioned love song, you sing. It's beautiful!  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Absolutely wonderfully romantic, Barry. Goodness, I really must get back here more often. You are better than ever, my friend! Patricia |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Great imagination, and poetry. Smile Jes |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent read. Enjoyed. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I adore each and every one of your writes that I have had the pleasure of reading! You are the "P" in "Poet"! ~ May all your morrow's skies be clear! Linda |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A true poet's soul revealed in this write Barry. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Barry, just read this again and am sighing all over again. It is incredibly beautiful. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and pray the morrow’s skies don’t weep" loved that line.. wonderful.."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
If but a hewn rope might fall before my feet beneath thy window's sill. I’ll climb my love, to touch thy hand and taste thy wine blushed lips, I will. And whence the dawn does cast upon thy eyes once closed in dream swept sleep I’ll bid thee well my love, I will and pray the morrow’s skies don’t weep. Big and long SIGHsssssss....Magnus, she is a very lucky woman to have a love like yours...your both very very very wealthy...this reminds me of a grand love story, with so much more to share...I see you both walking on a beach, hand in hand, in the moonlight, soft waves lapping the shore and both your feet...both smiling without a thought of it....just bubbling over in a flood of understanding... Incredible write dearheart..may love light always shine upon both of you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
PS...sure hope you both like the beach, cuz that's were I see you both??????? sorry |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Words flow gently off your pen ablaze with passionate love Swirling around the heart painting romantic dreams Magnificent...a keeper if I ever saw one...Your talent will ever amaze me, dear friend...**big hugs**... |
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