Open Poetry #33 |
My Lancelot |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You speak to me with your silver tongue words dripping necture upon which I become drunk with passions quest And when you smile my world is lit as if by the heat of the sun and I find I melt into a pool of desire The feel of your touch brushed across skin I beg for it to linger that I may savor the embrace of flesh You are my undoing my Lancelot a heart of a warrior a soul of a poet a part of my heart s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. very nicely done.. nicely done indeed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Susan...what a beautiful outpouring of passion and love. Very nicely penned indeed. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you both very much indeed -- hugs-- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Woo... Had to take a deep breath after that one! It was dripping with passion and lust. I really enjoyed the write. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If only Lancelot had read this....SHE would have never had a chance... Very passionate poem, well done Susan. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Lovely just beyond beautiful... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And when you smile my world is lit as if by the heat of the sun and I find I melt into a pool of desire The feel of your touch brushed across skin I beg for it to linger that I may savor the embrace of flesh So very lovely... so very loving. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all so much, dear poet friends. I appreciate the replies. Barry, you flatter me, you sweetheart. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed the lovely poem, lady love! .....jo |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
sounds like we share a vision of the same warrior poet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..very loving and lyric..much enjoyed.. spiros --------------- |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
These type of poems always put a great big smile in my heart...wonderfully expressed, thank you Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now, now, what are you doing writing about my man?!? ~ Oh, well, he'd be honoured! lol "Your" Lancelot is a lotta man! I enjoyed reading about him through your expressions of Olde! To love and valour! Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
let me see now..lancelot.hmmmmmmmmmm that was the guy that stole artie's chick and they opened up a bed and breakfast down by naughtytown or was it naughtyington..someplace naughty..hmmmmm kewl write ms Susan (grin) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks and hugs to all. E.A. since we are split from the same essence, it would seem we have similar tastes in our heros D.S. Hmmmmmm, is right. Loved your reply, chuckle, chuckle. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Susan, this is a beautiful poem. Enjoyed the read. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
JL, Thank you so much Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you James - susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
It brings a smile in hearts of love. I enjoyed Smile Jes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poets and their sword of words...Lancelots in deed... M |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Jes -- thank you M - yes indeed. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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