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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-07-20 03:12 PM

You speak to me
with your silver tongue
words dripping necture
upon which I become drunk
with passions quest

And when you smile
my world is lit
as if by the heat of the sun
and I find I melt
into a pool of desire

The feel of your touch
brushed across skin
I beg for it to linger
that I may savor
the embrace of flesh

You are my undoing
my Lancelot
a heart of a warrior
a soul of a poet
a part of my heart

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-07-20 03:14 PM

ah.. very nicely done..

nicely done indeed...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-07-20 03:14 PM

Oh my Susan...what a beautiful outpouring of passion and love.
Very nicely penned indeed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-07-20 03:45 PM

Thank you both very much indeed --

hugs--

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2004-07-20 03:51 PM

Woo... Had to take a deep breath after that one! It was dripping with passion and lust. I really enjoyed the write.
*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-07-20 04:39 PM

If only Lancelot had read this....SHE would
have never had a chance... Very passionate
poem, well done Susan.

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

6 posted 2004-07-20 05:32 PM

Lovely just beyond beautiful...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2004-07-20 05:33 PM

And when you smile
my world is lit
as if by the heat of the sun
and I find I melt
into a pool of desire

The feel of your touch
brushed across skin
I beg for it to linger
that I may savor
the embrace of flesh

So very lovely... so very loving. *S* I like this very much! *S*

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-07-20 07:30 PM

Thank you all so much, dear poet friends. I appreciate the replies.

Barry, you flatter me, you sweetheart.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-07-20 11:36 PM

Much enjoyed the lovely poem, lady love!

.....jo

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

10 posted 2004-07-21 03:02 AM

sounds like we share a vision of the same warrior poet

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-07-21 04:02 AM

*sigh*

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

12 posted 2004-07-21 07:23 AM

..very loving and lyric..much enjoyed..

spiros

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2004-07-21 08:01 AM

These type of poems always put a great big smile in my heart...wonderfully expressed, thank you Susan

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

14 posted 2004-07-21 08:26 AM

Now, now, what are you doing writing about my man?!? ~ Oh, well, he'd be honoured! lol

"Your" Lancelot is a lotta man! I enjoyed reading about him through your expressions of Olde!

To love and valour!

Linda

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

15 posted 2004-07-21 08:50 AM

let me see now..lancelot.hmmmmmmmmmm that was the guy that stole artie's chick and they opened up a bed and breakfast down by naughtytown or was it naughtyington..someplace naughty..hmmmmm kewl write ms Susan (grin)

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

16 posted 2004-07-21 10:09 AM

Thanks and hugs to all.

E.A. since we are split from the same essence, it would seem we have similar tastes in our heros

D.S. Hmmmmmm, is right. Loved your reply, chuckle, chuckle.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

17 posted 2004-07-21 12:55 PM

Susan, this is a beautiful poem. Enjoyed the read.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

18 posted 2004-07-21 02:48 PM

JL,

Thank you so much

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

19 posted 2004-07-23 12:42 PM

Silky...James

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

20 posted 2004-07-23 01:51 AM

Thank you James -

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

21 posted 2004-07-23 03:46 AM

It brings a smile in hearts of love.

I enjoyed

Smile

Jes

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

22 posted 2004-07-23 07:21 AM

Poets and their sword of words...Lancelots in deed...

M

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

23 posted 2004-07-23 10:26 AM

Jes -- thank you

M - yes indeed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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