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Open Poetry #33

Rocked by a whisper

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2004-07-20 05:48 AM

I’m rocked by a whisper yet found in the hay,

I try to please my inner demons yet I don’t care what they say.

Enticed by my loneliness,

Repelled by my good deeds,

The troubles` of the world makes my heart bleed.

Scratching on the surface,

Digging in my heels,

Does anyone know how it feels?

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2004-07-20 08:40 AM

*nods* quite familiar....not a good thing now is it??

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-07-20 08:44 AM

I hearya! Yes, indeed I do!

May all the whispers that you hear, be joyful ones...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2004-07-20 09:49 AM

ah.. those questions which we ask when it all seems madness..inside, and out..

nice piece.. I enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-07-20 12:22 PM

sure

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-07-20 01:49 PM

enjoyed this
and nodding yes

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2004-07-20 02:29 PM

definately nodding yes....
and definately understanding it....

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