Open Poetry #33 |
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Beyond The Grassy Knoll |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
O King the legions lie beyond the grassy knoll I hear their battle cry, I feel the drummer’s roll My blood doth stain the ground and life grows ever dim My speech refrains from sound, the outlook is most grim. For I have bravely fought, no quarter has been dealt Your wisdom I have sought, upon my knees I’ve knelt. And as our paths now part I bid thee well my king until our trumpets start and angels softly sing. The wealth of courage stands before the mighty foe as warriors clasp their hands though death they surely know. For as the light shall dim and fires shall feed the pyre I’ll stand and fight for him, my King and Lord, my Sire. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I thought this was really cool. Last year I was in my school's English Academic Superbowl team and we read a lot of poetry from the 1500's/1600's (Chaucer, etc.) and I really liked it. This brought back some memories of that. I really liked it. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sir, your words do speak of honor most bold. I can feel the words of warriors across the ages being spoken here. Or, in a more spiritual sense as well. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked it -Juju |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You always take me to another time with your poems. Great write, much enjoyed. Sandra |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sir Magnus, your courageous write finds me tonight thinking of King Arthur and his ponderous plight. I wish you God's speed and a stealty steed to fulfill your honor's deeds. Much enjoyed this tribute of honor to a fighter, and inspired by the vision. ![]() |
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