Open Poetry #33 |
proceeding as if normal |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
footsteps slow normality’s pretense, hard coming standstill takes control; alarm fosters trepidation fed by the lack of divination, apprehension worries life into fears that taunt faith’s forbearance tomorrow’s betrayal waves gaudily as today jackets itself with guilt survival begs the loosening of this encumbrance one day at a time is overfilled and leaking too many untold sorrows to undertake the weeping beneath the weight knees slip to the floor comfort is gifted the burden taken not knowing becomes a haven in Him Trust steps forward as if normally proceeding [This message has been edited by jellybeans (07-20-2004 02:48 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jellybeans, Makes sense to me, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in Him Trust once more ~*~ Faith...so fragile... yet so strong... Holding you... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sometimes the weight is enough to drive us to our knees. Isn't it wonderful that the burden can be lifted. Enjoyed this a great deal. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You know the secret to happiness and success in life! It is to keep the faith and keep moving forward, one step at a time! A very good message inherent in this moving piece of writing! Warm hugs, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I keep reading through this... and highlighting different portions... until all of it's highlighted! *S* There is immense frustration in not knowing... but there's also comfort of leaving that knowledge in the hands of the only One who can effect real change... You continue to define faith, my friend... and you do so beautifully. *S* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hugs my friend... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you don't write much, but when you do...oh boy! I gotta keep this one! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hugs to you sweet lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all, these days have been dark, so its good my muse is quiet.....*smile* |
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