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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-07-19 01:34 PM

my pen moves in sync with the beat of the music
to write down these emotions i've never known
these feelings i've never felt
just to understand what it may be like
theres words are not my own
they never have been

"kiss my forehead goodnight,and i'll kiss my dreams of you goodbye.."

they aren't mine
tell me what i'm missing
tell me what i did,
to gain such a seemingly neverending solitude.

i'll never understand,
to the capasity i dream of,
these words that flow from my heart
they stay bottled up inside of me
like a tap
poured out here and there
but never to anyone
a mystery man,
that never seems to exsist for me.

"your lips graze mine as we dance to the music of love,softly playing in the backround..."

i'll give you my tired heart,
still beating
barely..
if you tell me what i'm missing
if you tell me what i need
to feel complete
beause at the present time,
every love song being sung
every star shining
every romantic movie
has no meaning to me
without love telling me it's true..it's real..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-07-19 02:40 PM

You pour out your heart so well, the pain of feeling is palpable. My heart cries for you.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-07-19 02:54 PM

Life is always changing. What you may be experiencing at this point in time is most likely a temporary down time. A time for you to get to know yourself and understand what it is that will truly make your life happy. Be busy with life and being the best that you can be ~ and I promise you, you'll have many wonderful surprises waiting for you!

I know that the Universe wants us to be ultimately be happy!

I feel like jumping into my monitor and giving you a great big loving hug! Remember, your time WILL come, Dear One.

Love & Light,
EA

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 2004-07-19 08:34 PM

Can surely feel the emotion in that, very touching

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2004-07-19 09:46 PM

You poem says so much about you. It was a very good poem.

Juju

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-07-20 12:47 PM

you write from the heart, for sure

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-07-20 01:57 PM

very deeply written and expressed

vivid imagry and feeling your painful disappointment and desire to feed off the reality of life...

Well done

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