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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-07-18 12:32 PM


If Suzie's Not Around

Well now,
what am I going
to do if Suzie
doesn't love me.
If Suzie's (love)
isn't true.
Shipwrecked.
Run aground.
Breaking up.
Break down.
I'm going down
if Suzie's not around.
Am I weak.
Is she strong.
Am I right.
Is she wrong.
I'm breaking down
if Suzie's not
around.

JamesLee
July17
2004

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-07-18 01:34 AM


Oh, no, where's Suzie -- come on back, Suzie!  Seriously, hope everything is okay.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-07-18 03:26 AM


you'll be fine
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-07-18 06:03 PM


Thank you iliana and Passing Shadows for the nice responses...
Yes Passing Shadows I will be allright...it just doesn't seem like it right now...James

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-02-03 06:35 PM


Suzie's Still Around

Today, even though Suzie's far away,
everytime my heart pounds,
shes still around,
all around.
Though we're apart,
she's all over inside my heart,
She's still around,
everytime my heart pounds,
Suzie's still around...JamesLee 03February2007

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-10-27 05:48 PM


yes, you will be very fine

ARCTIC WIND

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