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In Wait |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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In Wait another hot July day and all I can think of is the sway of the feel of the music of Brahms tenderly pressed between palms a dancing wind in review for eyes living an ocean view an inch is a mile out of reach today between me and the beach but the sky is an ocean in the air within its tides carries my prayers where I am a passion in hesitate and another gulf breath is in wait "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"another hot July day and all I can think of is the sway of the feel of the music of Brahms tenderly pressed between palms a dancing wind in review for eyes living an ocean view" It's been way too long since I've seen the ocean. Some really nice images in this Helen. "gulf breath"...love that.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, makes me long for the gulf coast. Much enjoyed.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oooooh, Helen, this is really, really good! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Helen this was so cool! I love the beach, ocean, the palms...I love it all.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
May I echo iliana? Oooooh, so good! Enjoyed the feel within this. misc'e |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I gotta get to the beach soon |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very Nice! JL |
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