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Open Poetry #33

The Hardest thing to do

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-07-17 01:42 AM

Waitng is hard so ever so hard
for me to do,for I can't stop
myself from loving you. The
way you smile with the cute
dimples upon your face.

Makes me dream of a day
full of cotton candy
hopes and ideals of sweet
bliss forever.

Most of all I miss watching
you dift off to sleep,all
my fears melt away as I
sleep snuggly agaisnt your
skin,the warm of your flesh
keeps me safe within.

Oh,for the day the wonderful
day I get to see you again
My heart jumps at the thought
of feeling my body against
your skin. Dancing under the
moonlight to our favorite song.

Making love to me as it were
the first time kissing my lips
as it were a gift.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-07-17 12:10 PM

Waiting is most difficult and missing a sorrow. But then again, reunion is bliss.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-07-17 09:24 PM

I hope your loved one returns soon -- the absence is the hardest thing......

....jo

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2004-07-17 09:26 PM

That touched a nerve with me... The sad nerve... I'm going through something and that just was beautifully written. Spectacular.
*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2004-07-18 01:09 AM

im glad you liked it

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-07-21 03:37 AM

"Kissing my lips as if it were a gift."
Lovely writing...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-21 04:33 AM

yep...sounds like you're in love

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

7 posted 2004-07-21 08:27 PM

yea love stinks when he doesnt love you back and wants to date others coz he is young ugh

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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