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Open Poetry #33

I Want Your Picture

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-07-17 12:38 PM

I Want Your Picture

Lets make a deal.
Tell me your thoughts
and I'll tell you
how I feel.
If I may, I
have a few do's and
dont's for you.
Do continue to love me,
but don't tell me you
love me if when I'm around
you won't kiss me,
and don't tell me you
love me, if when I'm not
around, you don't miss me.
I want your pictue.

JamesLee
July16
2004

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-07-17 03:25 AM

Nice writing James, really, really!

but I don't see your picture up there?!?!
heh~

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2004-07-17 03:34 AM

nice!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-07-17 04:22 AM

love this

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-17 09:35 PM

and click to library -- great write, JamesLee!

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