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Open Poetry #33

If you were a Bubble

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-07-14 10:48 PM

If you were a bubble

Splish and a spash
The soap bar fell
You came from suds

giggles
smiles
and joy

Oh if you were a bubble
then there would be no trouble

Defraction and refraction
Colors burst from my hand

bubbles
The joys
and you

If only you were a bubble
and I was too it would double

We could both be bubbles

Juju

wornways
Member

since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

1 posted 2004-07-14 11:47 PM

i like this for some reason. there's something innocent and peaceful about the wording. it also made me think of an old song as i read that starts, "splish spash, i was taking a bath, all upon a saturday night ..."

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I no longer ask who I am, or even what I am. It has dawned on me that there are no answers to such questions, except for our feeble-minded notions.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-07-17 09:26 PM

Yeah it does. I don't know why I wrote this one, but I did.
Juju

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