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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-07-16 05:29 AM

Words in ancient passage,
Just a bit of written message,
Words upon the page.

There was small talk,
Memories of a walk,
Nothing of the rage.

A drawn picture
Glass vase with flower,
He wish he could send.

Words about them
Plans of time yet to spend
In her tomorrows.

No mail follows,
No hero returns
Dreams burn.

Gloom
*inspired by
Li Qi’s “An Old Air”

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-07-16 08:21 AM

This could "fit" yesterday, today and tomorrow...

always learning~~
M

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2004-07-16 09:04 AM

Some things never change.  I wonder why.  Good things come in small packages like this thought provoking poem. The hero...
  It looks like its time to clean off the library shelf for another welcome addition.
                 misc'e

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-07-16 09:09 AM

Words in ancient passage,
Just a bit of written message,
Words upon the page.

There was small talk,
Memories of a walk,
Nothing of the rage.

~smiling~ very nicely done Proff...very nice indeed....

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-07-16 09:13 AM

Professor,
Well done enjoyed the read.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-08-22 10:43 PM

Your inspirations always open
new pages, new thoughts
on ways we can change history.

Herstory too...

Thank you, Professor.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-08-23 12:48 PM

sigh

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-08-24 12:01 PM

Thoughtful write, Gloom.

...jo

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2004-08-24 11:44 AM

Gloom

"No mail follows,
No hero returns
Dreams burn."

This is a sad reality in far too many lives. You wrote it well.

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