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survival instincts |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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blazed by huge fire charcoal desolation lies lallang roots hold firm |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
interesting write, kaile lallang grass roots are survivors, and that's a good thing for the bird population enjoyed the play on the word lies |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I cannot think of any way to "tear this apart" per your critique message...all I can say, however, is that, like in nature, anything with a good root system can survive most disasters. I keep learning this message every day. Thank you, kaile. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Just curious, but how did you know that in the face of fire, lallang roots remain intact? :P Haha... very much enjoyed... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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