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Big Nursery Rhyme
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Big Nursery Rhyme |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Hide with me, with me hide na na na na na na In trees of three, of three in trees blah blah blah blah blah Kiss me you, you kiss me mmm mmm mmm mmm mmm mmm Peel these lips, lips peel these aha aha aha Pears are ripe, want to pick me? la, la, la, la, la la Ripe are pears, pick me want to? mmm mmm mmm mmm mmm mmm |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne Fun fun sun this time...so enjoyed the playfull of you. I think I could jump rope to it.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Corinne...this is such fun!! I love it. Happy hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, reminded me of when I was small, running around in a hide-seek game on a warm summer night. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL -- Corinne, this is an X-rated nursery rhyme, almost! hehehe -- nice and naughty....but mostly cute! *grin* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Light, whimsical, and a perfect read to go with my first cup of coffee this morning! Brings out the 'kid' in my soul, and much enjoyed! ~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ You took me back to the spreading branches of my Aunt's mulberry tree~ I 'thought' I was hidden in my eating pursuit ... Aunt Lois just ALWAYS knew where I'd been~ Dead giveaway ... the dreaded mulberry-purple tongue !!! You are delightful lady~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Corrine, Big nursery rhyme you've got, ah hot, ah hot, ah hot! Cute as a button! misc'e |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I loved iliana's remark that this sounded like an x-rated nursery rhyme! Perfect! la la, la la, la!  Loved it! Happy fun in summer sun!  Linda |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ripe Pears are always the sweetest.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
brings back memories |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh my. Thank you all for such kind responses! I was seriously blocked, so much so that I decided to write something extremely silly to see if that would help. I really think this is a stoooopid little ditty, but it did fit my mood of frustration! Thanks again! Corinne |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Big, is good. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I think you've found the secret of what made Dr Seuss's books so popular. You've a serious thought expressed in a "silly" repetition. Very clever and well done! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you Karilea and KayJay! Corinne |
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