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kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

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Oregon

0 posted 2004-07-15 12:07 PM

Precociously dense

Precociously dense
Male myopia gives pain
Females straining reins

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

1 posted 2004-07-15 12:17 PM

Ken

Interesting words
play in imagination
wondering meaning

"Precociously dense" Ya just gotta love those oxymorons.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-07-15 12:22 PM

now this is a thinker

very good, and usually true

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2004-07-15 12:30 PM

Martie:

Pip mostly women
Frustrations with men abound
But we're loveable

Dixie:
I think it is sometimes true both ways. Thank you.

Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-07-15 12:38 PM

Ken, you just have to know I'm smiling!
...Okay, it's a wicked grin.

You are so clever...so very clever.
Love it!!
~Smiles & Hugs m'friend~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Martie

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California

5 posted 2004-07-15 12:50 PM

Ken

Ahhhh, I see!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

6 posted 2004-07-15 12:57 PM

So very clever, kayjay! Enjoyed the puzzle!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-07-15 03:16 PM

Sluggishly see-through
Females insight far-reaching
Males concede battle

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2004-07-15 03:52 PM

I call it being aggressively stupid.....works for me!

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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

9 posted 2004-07-15 04:25 PM

Suthern told me in Houston they had a real oddity at the local hospital there...there was a baby born with a penis AND A BRAIN@!!!!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

10 posted 2004-07-15 05:36 PM

LOL, I understand rein-strain.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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OH

11 posted 2004-07-15 07:13 PM

Gee, this is a thriller site! Enjoyed your senryu and all the responses!
misc'e

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-07-15 08:00 PM

Smiling here -- Men good. So'kay?

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

13 posted 2004-07-15 08:03 PM

It looks like I've stirred a pot of opinions and some humor. Thanks to all who signed. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2004-07-15 08:07 PM

kayjay
It goes boyh ways, enjoyed.

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

15 posted 2004-10-20 06:06 PM

Men's faults are many,
Women have but two.
Everything they say...
And everything they do.

INclan

passing shadows
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displaced

16 posted 2004-11-01 09:45 PM

cool write

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