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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ You are pictures on a postcard a distant sparkling blazing blue; rolling in on waves that shimmer me, still. Buried deep beneath the sands wishing you were here seems so easy but you're not. A surreal setting on vacation infatuated by the captivation glints on golden strands encased like a necklace set in topaz. Pointed toward the sun hanging off the edge spilling from my lashes one by one. Phasing in the twilight going down around me like a warm pocket where I can catch your glare in short spans, reflecting without reeling. When ripped between the tides my poetry unresolved holding on a little longer my heart pounds, skipping between beats racing against my pain that keeps me feeling. Scarred by ultraviolet rays meant to heal breathing between breaths tempers the burn inside and out. ~*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
where are you....  and more M |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
No feelings pang like those of missing someone. It is always a pleasure to picture the images you find. Well done! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy... enjoyed this piece.. some new tones hidden in it D |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I've missed you, Bluesy Girl... feeling this with you K |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori hon, am so glad you are writing... heart hugs to you Lori, even in your pain you write so beautifuly.... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I'll just echo my friend Ken....word for word. Thank you, KJ...and thank you Lori, for being here. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a melancholy ache to this one Bluesy girl. Well done...very well done. Now don't ya go missing on us again ya hear?!  Hugs You! ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
When ripped between the tides my poetry unresolved holding on a little longer my heart pounds, skipping between beats racing against my pain that keeps me feeling. this actually made me feel like I was rolling in and out of the waves... this was a tremendous read...thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori "Scarred by ultraviolet rays meant to heal breathing between breaths tempers the burn inside and out." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Even in pangs of pain, your song is sweet and strong. Loved this and especially the following verse. ***************** Phasing in the twilight going down around me like a warm pocket where I can catch your glare in short spans, reflecting without reeling. *************** Just sort of shows a bit of strength without fear of the reflected pause. Enjoyed much |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, You make it easy to feel your pain. You write so smooth. But you bless us with so little of it. More please... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you all so much, I must have done something right to deserve you. You're replies mean more to me than ever, and I thank you, sincerely~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bluesy...you know where I am. Always here with you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a write from the heart..... you know where I am, ladybug |
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