Open Poetry #33 |
Hot Stuff |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sun is playing peek-a-boo teasing that he won’t be so hot but I know better, that’s for sure; he’s hotter than he’s not. ©July 12, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes indeedy-bob, so very true. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hotter than he's not! Yep, that's telling it like it is. But the summer time isn't long enough, and I wouldn't trade it for anything. Well that's not completely true, but it's close. Neat poem, VAS~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Vas, Cute as can be, perhaps, with a little underlying meaning? Enjoyed it, and have the 45 Plus UVA/UVB/IR handy. misc'e |
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