Open Poetry #33 |
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Reasoning With God |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA ![]() |
Reasoning with God “Dear God it just does not seem fair Why pain and sorrow some must bear, And those, that sin, seem to live in peace, And revel in luxury and a life of ease. And why must one life’s pleasures miss In order to earn thy heavenly bliss.” “Dear Son”, said God, “why so irate And why you seek me to berate; Pain and sorrow that some bear, Is because of those who do not care; And how your life you wish to lead, Is for you to choose by thought or deed”. “But God”, said I “why not use thy might To show those wrong, what is right, So that those who suffer and cannot fight May be spared their tragic plight; And then will freedom of thought and deed Be exercised equally by all indeed”. “Why”, said God, “ should I bend one’s will When each has the freedom to instill Within themselves of wrong and right By thought or deed or will or might. For freedom is for the righteous and meek And equally for those who prey on the weak”. “So the path you seek is yours to find If so you desire to appease your mind And your conscience lies in wait to speak Of answers that you claim to seek Remember …a candle in the dark will aid the sight Only… if one chooses to kindle the light.” |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Why”, said God, “ should I bend one’s will When each has the freedom to instill Within themselves of wrong and right By thought or deed or will or might. For freedom is for the righteous and meek And equally for those who prey on the weak”. so extremely vivid and enlightening Thank you for sharing. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Anwaar, have not seen you around for awhile. This was a wonderful poem; reminds me of the struggles of Job in the New Testament of the Bible somehow. |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Thank you L.J and Illiana for your encouraging comments. Illiana, I have been busy moving for the last couple of months and have missed all the wonderful friends on Passions. Nice to be back again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
A man said to the universe: "Sir I exist!" "However," replied the universe, "The fact has not created in me A sense of obligation." Stephen Crane |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for sharing your conversation with your God. I've asked some of those same Q's, didn't always like the answers. Hope now that the move is done we might have more visiting time with you. Peace to you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Some very valid questions and answers. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to see you again my struggle with religion has been intense lately thank you for this poem |
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