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Open Poetry #33
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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going
0 posted 2004-10-19 04:22 PM


Misunderstood montage
collage clippings
of euphoric sorrow.
misplaced reality
contradicted and convoluted
matters of fact.
unordinary understanding
upon organized complacency
breeding chaos upon
a distraught mind.
monotonous mentality
within a messed up reality
all combine
to a lacking
superficial point of view.
distorted, disgraced
juxtaposed positions
thrown for a loop
within a distorted memory
join to create
a hazy understanding
of a crumbling world

(Ah yes another stream of conciousness/fee verse poem. Let me know what you think.)

nice use of muffin
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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2004-10-19 04:57 PM

well put.
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