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Vertigo (babygirl & littlewing)
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Vertigo (babygirl & littlewing) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Tell me again why I deserve such space and time, the physics to fantasize deeply driven darkened thoughts, lying akimbo in my Jesus Christ pose, like a whirligig spun out of control, crashing to burn before I am set on fire. Not unlike the sweetened blush of a lone, fresh petal the velveteen rush of blood coming straight through roots to air brushing my lips, moistening my cheek, each petal soundly sleeping . . . a reverie between one dream and another, concealing the source in the deep-surge of some aspen night, how it takes, how it cherishes, the palewhite slowfast moth threads the burning pillars of rosepetals, all split, all spilt over the hour of calm and silences spill over your willing, dark throat, lower now, shadows cast no bodies but these, beaten silver with hands to arrest this eternal moment, in a semblance of black rain, perishing into ache. Tell me again out of what vehemence could we slow this vertigo... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well well... what a treat. An absolutely fantabulous collab. Well done both of you. I look forward to more. into my library you both go.  Maree  and I am haunted |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent excellent write! Well done and I hope to see more from the both of you. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Not unlike the sweetened blush of a lone, fresh petal the velveteen rush of blood coming straight through roots to air brushing my lips, moistening my cheek, each petal soundly sleeping . . . a reverie between one dream and another, concealing the source in the deep-surge of some aspen night, how it takes, how it cherishes, the palewhite slowfast moth threads the burning pillars of rosepetals, all split, all spilt over the hour of calm and silences very nice... very nice indeed! |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
Tres belle. I was looking forward to this, but didn't expect it so soon! If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
littlewing... you are a true delight to dance with...thank you... ******************************************** and thanks to all of you for stopping by to witness our dance... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
A NOTE FROM Littlewing, who is having technical difficulties and no net connection at home....she wanted to make sure to thank everyone for stopping in to see this and for the warm replies...she will pop in as soon as electronically possible.... love&light, **babygirl & littlewing** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Did not expect the write so soon, seemless write and hopefully one of many |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Aenimal... we're the swift kids on the block...just waiting for you old folks to catch up...lol... thanks for hitting this... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Littlewing's long been a favorite of mine... I added babygirl to that list tonight and then WOW . . . together! Certainly happy I dropped by tonight... jwesley |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
As long as you're not the New Kids On The Block..shivers.. die 80's memories die! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is pretty much as expected..Thick and rich. Quite a dance ladies! "Velveteen" and "vehemence" in the same write, a conceit of each methinks. And they said it couldn't be done...lol |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maree . . . *smile* I am so happy you liked this, thank you Thank you Nancy! Ron, I am more than honored you liked. Indigo! Thank you so much! Mari, YOU are the dancer here, m'friend, I only followed in your footsteps for a spell, I thank YOU for this and for leaving my message for me, too. I have not seen someone with so much PUNCH like you have so seamless . . . thanks for wanting to write . . . Thank you V! Raph, thank you, I hope so too (heh, didja see that? She thinks you are older n' me ahahahaha plbbbbbbbbbbt  )What eighties? (they never existed, shush) hey J . . where have you been? Thank you SO much . . . Eddie, thank you . . . I am SO happy you liked. *smile* Thank you guys, in case I dont get back on . . . babyg?  my honor . . . |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Definitely a treat! I hope to read and witness some more of these dances soon. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
terrific and powerfully done...wow...what a write, very much enjoyed...thank you for sharing... |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
littlewing nah-ah...the honor was mine...and you made it very easy for me ((thank you))... you are a doll... so much love, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
GG & Lee J... thank you for dropping in on us... **babygirL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sue, well she's mistaken i mean god, i don't think i'll even make it to be thaaaat old ducks n covers |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
GG and Lee thank you SO much for reading Babyg? it was a pleasure to write with you, it just fell together *smile* excuse me while I toss tomatoes at Raph *grin* you said that YEARS ago . . . ehe Thanks guys . . . |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love it when birds of a feather dance together (two of my very favorite people) that don't even know yet how alike they truly are. Ladies, you do a mean word jive. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 now that's a duet to remember! What a tasty treat, an absolutely delightful blend of two wonderful artists. Take a bow, both of you.(what the heck is a JC pose? LOL) |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Mysteria & Midnite... thank you both so much! much love, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a treat to read you both wthin these words nicely done M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you so much Sharon, Kacy and Maureen, My God much too good to us and me, always have been . . . A Jesus Christ pose the way I meant was well, kind of tired, like JC was at the end . . . Soundgarden wrote a tune entitled that and it seemed to fit right here. Thanks guys . . . |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Not too often very line lights-up. Well penned here. Very nice bg & lw. Very nice. wayne If nothing is something |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I forgot to save the thing that is why I forgot this! Good thing you reminded me to save it, as when two birds of a feather fluff feathers together - the down is the softest ever! I can still beg for another can't I? Making a duet book and need it filled - lots of room yet. One day my girls when they are grown up will say, "Boy Gramma sure knew a lot of good poets." Either that, or "Man was she was crazy to collect all this stuff!" Anyway I love you two and you know it! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
how the hell did i miss you two together in one poem ...i almost fainted reading this and it went so well together i am not sure which lines are whose ... no matter what this is a keeper , peace to both of you beautiful lady's how about a date ...hahaa howllls ~wolfie (((((HUGS))))) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very much enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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