Open Poetry #33 |
Hey Mr. Truck Driver…. |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Hey Mr. Truck Driver…. Now just because I was decked out in fabric of today over youth of yesteryear’s yearnings was it only my wanting imagination allowing possibilities that you, the truck driver, stayed just behind my right car door as we crept through morning’s heyday while my black skirt inched mid-high just like it did yesteryear.. so… was the view still worth it? or did you play on the brake like I played on the words... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
So coy! I love this! "or did you play on the brake like I played on the words..." miscellanea |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and to think I am in this lowslung boxer and can't even see in the window or your benz.. pout I want a truck kewl stuff..playful naughtyness enjoyed it |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
hee hee it wasn't your imagination... K |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love your naughtiness! You wear it well! EA |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling* at this....seems years since truck drivers played on brakes for me *grin* but I still remember...you play the words well |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"or did you play on the brake like I played on the words..." Enjoyed your naughty playfulness this morning. I remember those days..thanks for the morning grins Deca girl!! Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
LOL love this!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
grinning...well done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling here - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Way to get the motor running!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ya know, I coulda swore I responded to this in the morning when I read it. I know I told a few truck drivers I work with about it though....and yeppers, it is MOST definately the truth! (they even admit it too...grinz...) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Inch away! Very cute. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I like the way you drive. Lil' playful convoy maker. Reg~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Deca, this piece is so you...YES, most certainly...and no, it wasn't me in that truck...darn, darn, darn!! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
HeeHee Have a friend who drives a big ole bus.When I would ride with him. I'd sit and watch as he looked down and I would say....... "Are you lookin' at the car or the girl........?" Guess what he would say.............. Lol BonBon |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wooohooo, sexyyyy. Smiling wide here. Enjoyed Deca. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... summer's end gets some extra sizzle! *S* I enjoyed this very much! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (09-08-2004 03:24 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Home for lunch...and a treat! Now go get back in my truck and hit the road....dum-de-dum....thinking..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The hem of skirt keeps men alert and wakeful to the road. So wear it proud and shout it loud You're helping safety's code. Nicely provacative. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
yet again another powerful poem to me ARCTIC WIND |
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